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Oh hell yes!! Love how it turned out!!! Good loop as well, I love seeing more Edy!

Another great fest animation! I got nothing but love and support for all those hard working animators that brought this to life. Every fest animation brings me lots of joy and raw motivation to work. To my homies reading this, I love all you guys!!!!

All the homies pulled up and delivered on this one. This is ballin!

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Props to all the artists, there was not a single card I did not adore! I feel that the only thing that did not land was all the referential humor, it impeded on the descriptions and a lot of the descriptions were just copy and pasted from a wiki. I feel the referential humor could have worked if it was two characters conversing, for example, Redd supplying the descriptions, and Pod giving commentary. It could have enhanced the experience. Either way, I enjoyed my NG taro cards immensely.

Taka responds:

That's a pretty good idea actually...

Love it. Its got such charm and I support tax evasion

HIGH SCOOOOOOOORE YEAAAAAAAAA I LOVE THE DOOOOOOOOOG

Recent Audio Reviews

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I'm so in love with this track! Every time I listen to it, I recognize other tracks that either you made or the other SiN collaborators. I adore your work and I anticipate your uploads!

Lothyde responds:

Much appreciated!

Bangin piece!

YES! ITS OUT!! AAAAAAA

Recent Art Reviews

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I was more than happy to help and I got an amazing commission out of it too. I'd call it a win-win.

Augh! Cliffhanger ending! This is really good buildup of the story! I am so curious as to what will happen next. The readability and designs are on point. I feel that the comic itself could use some stronger pure black values here and there as a suggestion. The fact that the comic is in b&w means that the last pages can have a little bit of wiggle room for interpretation as to what will happen next!

3eep responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the story ^^ and yeah! it's supposed to be an open ending, I personally am a fan of those kind of endings haha

Interesting comic! I like the use of color at the end and the design of Maceta himself. The story, from what I gather, is about Maceta's journey with the white flower to the surface world. This creates interesting visuals in BOTH B&W and color! I also like that you used minimal dialogue and instead communicate visually. Pages 10-11 and the last two pages were your strongest pages!

That said, I feel like the lack of readability in some pages does hurt the story. I feel like a lot of what is happening visually is hard to follow. On page 5 for example, I can understand the top half of the page (Maceta hiding in his pot and the flower illuminating the inside) but after that, I don't know who is talking or what is happening. This happens for a lot of the comic (pages 5-9) and I think I have a solution.

Whenever you do make your next comic I think you should limit yourself to fewer panels per page because I think having too many created a lot of clutter. And I think you should try doing more comics because I would love to see more adventures like this! I think your art lends itself to comics but can look a bit chaotic when a lot of action happens on one page. Either way, I really want to see you improve PAM!!!

P-PAMda responds:

WOKE UP TO PHASMA LONG COMMENT AAAAAAAAAA <3

Thanks you so much for the critique, I really need them since I REALLY want to keep doing my own webcomic and doing them in general aaa

I feel like the 16 pages thing made my brain be like "cram all in there!!!" Since I wanted to tell a lot in little page. And you can see how it happened haha, lot of cluster and mess and lack of readibility. Tried to chew more than I could handle when this is my only first long comic.
I'm taking notes on what you're commenting and will reread this when working on my next! I'll try to pace things better and give things a better breather, so they're more understandable. In the end that's one of the most important things on a comic, that you can understand what's going on!

Thanks you so much for specificating the pages and taking the time on critiquing so I can take a better look at this later <3 AND for the encouragement words too AAA, I'm glad that you still liked things from the comic makes me real happy. I'll do my best so everyone can experience what goes through my messy brain better >:')

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