This was a really fun read! The page turns were very suspenseful and I really dig the setting and layouts. Above all, that last page has a real punch to it. I adore the design of la Lechuza and how you portrayed her!!
I can tell it's an inspiration, but La Lechuza is actually an old Mexican legend I am familiar with. From what I have been told, La Lechuza is an old woman (sometimes a witch) who shapeshifts into an owl to hunt for drunkards or children.
Overall, I think this is one of my favorite entries so far in the Jump contest!