PhasmaGORE's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[(COMIC) BIRD OF PREY - PROLOGUE PART 1]

Oooh, this is an interesting prologue! I like the mystery of the number! And that mystery character that busts in at the end!! And don't worry, you're not the only one who is revamping their old content! (coughcoughCorvid Kid)

I felt that the only thing that was a bit lacking was the design of the main character Kare. I found that in some scenes I mistook him for a background character. Unless that is intentional, then don't mind me.

Tamag0 responds:

ty ty!! im excited for corvid kid too!!!!

yes, kare does look a bit plain but it is intentional ;) he'll change into his Main Character Look after the prologue!!

[Firewood - Chapter 02]

In just this chapter, I already find myself charmed with the Michigan gang, especially in that penultimate page. It feels like its setting up for a strong focus on the core of the trio. Loving how its looking so far!

[Firewood - Chapter 01]

As someone who read that first, original script, I have this almost second hand pride reading this. This first chapter is what's helping push me make my own comic that I got in the works. Can't wait for chapter 2!!!

[Eye of the Lamb]

Oh my GOD I LOVED THIS PART!!! I loved the compositioning and the way you animated the water and how fluid and violent you characterized the movements. Solid work man! Also I love the Samson short design lol

itsabluebanana responds:

Thank you for the compliment (and reminding me to post the outfit designs that I did haha)

[Sand Castles]

I love this painterly styled pic! As someone who tries to emulate this style a lot I can appreciate just how well you nailed the texture and colors. If I had any criticism towards this piece, it would be that the image feels a bit small, and as a result some details get lost. Though I know it was formatted this way for a reason.

Either way I love it!!

Also:
HIM!!

KEKIIRO responds:

AAAAAA thank you ;^;

i do need to paint in larger canvases tbh, i can just size it down when it needs to be. I'll practice it more.

[Corey in Acrylic]

Ayo, really nice brushwork. Love the textures on this piece. *CoughmarcodiazlookinassCough*

[Rando]

Nice!! I like the gritty looking texture you added to his mask and his pose is pretty nice too!

[3 years]

Ayo this slaps! I like the more graphic elements you added in! This really has a lot of your personality integrated into the details.

[Black Chocobo]

I love him

[Into the Unkown]

Join us Doc, into the unknown...